homework

2017-11-17 · 첨삭 강사 Gemma

학생이 쓴 원문

-Do you think that dysfunctional family life contributes to worsening relationships in society? -I think so. because dysfunctional family is limited emotional expression. And they have a negative effect to their children. Also They can't provide proper parenting for children's growth.

강사 첨삭

Good morning [이름]. Happy Friday to you! Thanks for answering the homework today. I see that you really have such a good opinion. So, it\'s really important for parents to raise their children properly. ^^

~TEACHER GEMMA

-Do you think that dysfunctional family life contributes to worsening relationships in society?
-I think so. because dysfunctional family is limited emotional expression.

>>I think so because dysfunctional family has limited emotional expressions.

And they have a negative effect to their children.

>>CORRECT
Also They can\'t provide proper parenting for children\'s growth.

>>Moreover, they can\'t provide proper parenting for children\'s growth.

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