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2017-11-17 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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17th November Jeny, I'm so sorry. The alarm sounded in the morning, but I did not hear it at all. I woke up at 9 a.m. I shouted I was crazy when I woke up. Anyway thanks for your calling^: Homework: It is a difficult question. I thought life was always a continuation of choice. And I seem to be becoming a person who is responsible for that choice. So I think that life is a constant wandering and wandering to find the right answer. Also,I seem to be getting so old.

강사 첨삭

Hello Julie!!!


It\'s okay, don\'t worry about it. I guess you were very tired that\'s why you didn\'t hear the alarm.

Remember that learning English requires action. One small action is more powerful than reading hundreds of articles. Yes, we know it is very hard to do things, even if they are good for us. 

I commend you for being so active and alert to listen and speak the language; continue that attitude because you can achieve many things in learning English.

Don\'t pull yourself down!!!!

T. Jeny   



17th November

>>correct

OR>>November 17, 2017

>>17th  of November
 Jeny, I\'m so sorry.

>>correct

The alarm sounded in the morning, but I did not hear it at all.

>>The alarm rang this morning, but I did not hear it at all.

I woke up at 9 a.m. I shouted I was crazy when I woke up. 

>>correct
 Anyway thanks for your calling^:
>>Anyway thanks for calling^:

Homework:
>>correct

It is a difficult question.

>>correct
 I thought life was always a continuation of choice.

>>I think life is always a continuous choice.
 And I seem to be becoming a person who is responsible for that choice.

>>correct
 So I think that life is a constant wandering and wandering to find the right answer.

>> So I think that life is a constant wandering to find the right answer.

Also,I seem to be getting so old.

>>I also seem to be getting so old.

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