Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I was prepared for a earthquake of ramen, rice.
But I surprised to hear news of the earthquake the day before yesterday.
Korea is not safe space anymore.
This makes me sad.
Thanks.
Have a nice weekend~~~~~
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Thank you for your homework. Be safe always. I am glad that your area was not hit by the earthquake.
Have a wonderful weekend!
~Kelly^^
I was prepared for a earthquake of ramen, rice.
>> For a possible earthquake, I can prepare ramen and rice.
But I surprised to hear news of the earthquake the day before yesterday.
>> But, I was surprised to hear from the news about the earthquake the day before yesterday.
Korea is not safe space anymore.
>> Korea is not a safe place anymore.
This makes me sad.
>> Correct.
Thanks.
>> Correct.
Have a nice weekend~~~~~
>> Correct.
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