Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK:
WRITING SKILLS:
ESSAY: What do you think was the most important invention in history? Please explain your answer.
Answer:
I think the invention of electricity is the most important invention in history.
If without electricity we can't anything do it.
Thank you teacher Mia!
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
I hope you enjoyed your weekend!
Thank you for answering.
~~ Teacher Mia ~~
I think the invention of electricity is the most important invention in history.
If without electricity we can\'t anything do it.
If without electricity we can\'t anything do it.
>> I think the most important invention in history is electricity.
Without electricity, we can\'t do anything.
OR:
>> We can\'t do anything if we don\'t have electricity. I think that is the most important invention in the history.
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