homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Well, having a healthy life makes us live longer.
This is an advantage because we can stay longer with our loved ones.
Let\'s be healthy always. ^^
Have a good night and enjoy the weekend!
_Teacher Dianne ^^
1. There is a _____ on the cake.
b. fly
>> correct
2. How are your _____ today?
b. babies
>> correct
3. He is a good _____.
b. boy
>> correct
4. We arrived here two _____ ago.
a. days
>> correct
5. _____ are stronger than girls.
a. Boys
>> correct
I prey for my healthy life in body and mind.
>> I pray for my healthy life especially body and mind.
I exercise, sleep and eat medicine that need to replenish essential nutrient.
>> I exercise, sleep, and take medicines that need to replenish essential nutrients in my body.
Average life will be 120 in the future because of developement of science.
>> The average life span will be 120 in the future because of the development of science. (Wow! I\'m not sure if I want to live until this age. kkk)
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