Homework

2017-11-20 · 첨삭 강사 Mia

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HOMEWORK: WRITING SKILLS: ESSAY: Do you have many disasters in you country which are caused by weather? Please answer in complete sentences Answer: The disasters by weather doesn't often in my country. However, during the rainy season is always happened to damage area. Thank you teacher Mia! Have a fantastic weekend.

강사 첨삭

Hi!
Good job in making your assignment!
~~ Teacher Mia ~~
The disasters by weather doesn\'t often in my country.
However, during the rainy season is always happened to damage area.
>> The disasters which are caused by weather often occur in my country.
However during the rainy season, some disasters can damage some of the areas in South Korea.

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