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I think science technology was advanced but our environment got no good.
When I was young, water was very clean.
However It was not that now.
I feel sorry that.
I think there are only good things in our life.
Bye~
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Thank you for your thoughts. I agree with you. I hope that should care more about our environment.^^
See you!
~Kelly^^
I think science technology was advanced but our environment got no good.
>> I think technology is developed, but our environment is getting destroyed.
When I was young, water was very clean.
>> When I was young, the water was very clean.
However It was not that now.
>> However, these days, the water is not clean anymore.
I feel sorry that.
>> I feel sorry for that.
I think there are only good things in our life.
>> I think, there are only some good things in our life.
Bye~
>> Correct.
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