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I prefer having more time to having more money.
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People often say if you become a doctor, your spouse and children will enjoy spending money but not you.
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I saw many people who makes a lot of money but can\'t spend it because they are too busy to work.
>> I saw many people who make a lot of money but can\'t spend it because they are too busy working
It seems that they usually talk themselves they will rest and enjoy their lives after they retire and have a lot of time.
>> It seems that they usually talk to themselves they will rest and enjoy their lives after they retire and have a lot of time.
However some of them died due to fatigue or other diseases and never get chance to rest and spend money.
>> However some of them died due to fatigue or other diseases and never got a chance to rest and spend money.
Even if they don\'t die, they often don\'t know how to spend time for themselves without working since they are not used to do it.
>> Even if they don\'t die, they often don\'t know how to spend time for themselves without working since they are not used to doing it.
I love money but I want to make a lot of money to do what I want and have a comfortable life.
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If I focus way too much on making more money, it would be a wag the dog situation.
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Therefore my conclusion is, once I earn more than a certain amount of money, then having more time is more precious than earning more money.
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