Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
The death penalty is the best way to control and reduce serious crime. What is your opinion?
I agree with the statement. This is because I think all of people are scary death. So, if the people who made some serious problems want to be dead, they don't commit a crime.
강사 첨삭
I agree with the statement. This is because I think all of people are scary death. So, if the people who made some serious problems want to be dead, they don\'t commit a crime.
I agree with the statement. In my opinion, all people are scared of death, in this way, it will lessen people to commit serious crime because the payment of what they did would be their lives.
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