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2017-11-21 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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I don't set rules for how to use my time because I know I will stress over it later and I was planning to have nothing but fun this year. I will make plans for how to use my time next year. If I make plans, I would make my first rule be about having enough s[이름]p. I always s[이름]p late and have to wake up at the same time, so I think I'll have to make my rule say when to s[이름]p and when to wake up.

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]!

All of us have rules we live by whether we realize it or not.

Sometimes setting and following rules lead us to the right path.

However, these also restrict us from doing things that we enjoy.

Thanks for writing this. See you tomorrow.

~Teacher Shanee^^,


I don\'t set rules for how to use my time because I know I will stress over it later and I was planning to have nothing but fun this year.

>>> OR: I don\'t set rules on how to use my time because I know I will just be stressed about it and I was planning to have nothing but fun this year.

I will make plans for how to use my time next year.

>>> Correct!

If I make plans, I would make my first rule be about having enough s[이름]p.

>>> Correct!

I always s[이름]p late and have to wake up at the same time, so I think I\'ll have to make my rule say when to s[이름]p and when to wake up.

>>> OR: I always s[이름]p late and wake up early, so I think I\'ll have to make a rule over my s[이름]ping hours.

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