Homework.

2017-11-20 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

학생이 쓴 원문

First of all, I will say clearly what I want to tell the problem about goods. And I will point out their rude attitude. If their attitude is still rude, I will report to the consumer ombudsman center. Then I will demand an apology them. Also I will receive a reward about the goods.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

Thank you for your composition.

I already feel that you would be a responsible student.

I\'m looking forward to our next class.

I\'ll talk to you then!

~~ Teacher Sharon

First of all, I will say clearly what I want to tell the problem about goods.

>> First, I will clearly explain the problem about their goods.

And I will point out their rude attitude.

>> I will also point out their rude attitude.

If their attitude is still rude, I will report to the consumer ombudsman center.

>> If they are still rude, I will report them to the Consumer Ombudsman Center.

Then I will demand an apology them.

>> Then, I will demand an apology from them.

Also I will receive a reward about the goods.

>> I will also ask for compensation for the inconvenience.

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