homework

2017-11-21 · 첨삭 강사 May

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If you were offered a job in another country, would you be willing to take the job, assuming that the pay is very good? If I get a chance to work in another country.. It is very worried. I think that It will take many time to decide to go or not to go. I like to go travel to another country. but If I have to go overseas for a job, I is difficult to go. Because I have many people that I love in my place, I cannot go another country. Instead, I'll go travel another country with my freind.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! How are you?

Thanks for answering your homework.

I remember my aunt because she was also offered

a job to work abroad. She grabbed it but after just

2 months of working there, she went home immediately.

She went home and left her job abroad because she

missed her family. In that case, she doesn\'t want

to leave anymore. I think you are like that, too.

Talk to you tomorrow [이름]! ^^

~~Teacher May~~

If I get a chance to work in another country..
It is very worried.

>> If I get a chance to work in another country, I will be very worried.
I think that It will take many time to decide to go or not to go.

>> I think it will take many times to decide whether I will go or not.
I like to go travel to another country.

>> CORRECT
but If I have to go overseas for a job, I is difficult to go.
Because I have many people that I love in my place, I cannot go another country.

>> But if I have to go overseas for a job, it will be difficult for me to go because there are many people that I love here in my country.
Instead, I\'ll go travel another country with my freind.

>> I will just visit other countries with my friend.

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