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Hi there, [이름]!

Thank you for being diligent and passionate in learning English. Keep up the good work.^^

~Kelly^^

I like convenience of cell phone.

>> I like the convenience of a cell phone.
First, I don\'t have to go to bank.

>> Firstly, I don\'t have to go to the bank anymore.
Second, I can send a message to my friends missing.

>> Secondly, I can send a message to my friends if I miss them.
Third, I can watch a movies or Youtube.

>> Lastly, I can watch movies or videos on YouTube.
I think cell phone is a magic because everything can do.

>> I think, a cell phone is like magic because I can do everything by using it.
Bye

>> Correct.