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2017-11-22 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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What do you have your nest egg for? ==> I do homework after a long time. I am coming back home and I am in the train. Maybe I will arrive at home around 8 PM. I don't have time to do homework because I don't have room for composure. I am very sorry about that, Klein. Anyway I am doing homework right now. In my case, I have small nest egg for my family. As you know I work alone among my family. So I have to prepare emergency situation for my family. If I don't have nest money, I will embarrass when I need some money for overcoming the emergency situation. I think it is very important thing to me and it is a method for keeping my family.

강사 첨삭

Indeed! But I am happy you made time for it again.

No worries. It\'s like your homework is just there. You can definitely accomplish it anytime you\'re available.

Thank you for sharing part of your life once more. Work hard, James, but play harder later. You can do it!

Have a safe time!

-Klein-

What do you have your nest egg for?
 ==>
 I do homework after a long time.
>>I am doing my homework after a long time. 

I am coming back home and I am in the train.

>>I am coming back home and I am on a train.
 Maybe I will arrive at home around 8 PM.
>>Correct

OR >> Maybe I will arrive home around 8 PM.

I don\'t have time to do homework because I don\'t have room for composure.
>>I don\'t have time to do my homework because I don\'t have room for composure.

I am very sorry about that, Klein.
>>Correct
Anyway I am doing homework right now.

>>Anyway, I am doing my/the homework right now.
 In my case, I have small nest egg for my family.

>>Correct
 As you know I work alone among my family.

>>Correct

 So I have to prepare emergency situation for my family.

>>So I have to prepare for my family\'s emergency situation.
 If I don\'t have nest money, I will embarrass when I need some money for overcoming the emergency situation.

>>If I didn\'t have nest egg, I will be embarrassed if I need some money to overcome an emergency situation.
 I think it is very important thing to me and it is a method for keeping my family.

>>I think it is a very important thing to me and it is a method or way to keep my family.

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