Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^
Good evening! ^^
Thank you for sharing your thoughts about this topic.
It will practice your sentence construction and I we almost got
all of our sentences correct.
Please go over the corrections.
Thank you.
T. Glenda
If I had to give up my cellphone, my computer, or my TV, I would give up my TV.
>> Correct
Because I need more my cellphone and my computer than TV.
>> Because I need my cellphone and my computer more than my TV.
I usually get most of the information on my smartphone.
>> I usually get most of information from my phone.
I use my cellphone and my computer to do internet shopping.
>> Correct
And the most important thing is that I always work with my computer.
>>Correct
But I watch TV when I have nothing to do.
>>Correct
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