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2017-11-23 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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If I had to give up my cellphone, my computer, or my TV, I would give up my TV. Because I need more my cellphone and my computer than TV. I usually get most of the information on my smartphone. I use my cellphone and my computer to do internet shopping. And the most important thing is that I always work with my computer. But I watch TV when I have nothing to do.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^

Good evening! ^^


Thank you for sharing your thoughts about this topic.

It will practice your sentence construction and I we almost got

all of our sentences correct.

Please go over the corrections.

Thank you.


T. Glenda



If I had to give up my cellphone, my computer, or my TV, I would give up my TV.

>> Correct
 Because I need more my cellphone and my computer than TV.

>> Because I need my cellphone and my computer more than my TV.

 I usually get most of the information on my smartphone.

>> I usually get most of information from my phone.

I use my cellphone and my computer to do internet shopping.

>> Correct

And the most important thing is that I always work with my computer. 

>>Correct
 But I watch TV when I have nothing to do.

>>Correct

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