homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
It\'s always fun to be young. Enjoy wonderful moments with your friends!
Have a good day!
~t. Kelly^^
What do you enjoy doing with your best friend? Answer in not more than FIVE (5) sentences.
I usually play game with my friends.
>> I usually play a game with my friends.
We can play a game together so I am happy and fun.
>> We can play a game together so I am happy because it\'s fun to be with them.
Or I can ride the bikes with my friends.
>> Or I can ride a bike with my friends.
We can race by bike.
>> We can also do bike racing.
And I can talk with my friends at school.
>> Correct.
We can talk about game,homework.
>> We can talk about games and homework.
So, I do many things with my friends.
>> Correct.
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