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2017-11-22 · 첨삭 강사 May

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If you were offered a job in another country, would you be willing to take the job, assuming that the pay is very good? if you have a chance to me, i am willing to go another country. because i want to learn anything. i don't care anywhere. I think learning new thing is cool.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thanks for doing your homework.

I appreciate your answer. If I were also given a chance to work in another country,

I would also be willing to take the job but at the same time, I will feel sad because

I\'ll be missing my family so much, especially my husband.

Talk to you later!^^

~~Teacher May~~

if you have a chance to me, i am willing to go another country.
because i want to learn anything.

>> If I were given a chance, I would be willing to go to another country because I want to learn anything.

i don\'t care anywhere.

>> It doesn\'t matter where it is.
I think learning new thing is cool.

>> I think learning new things is cool.

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