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2017-11-22 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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I think that money and fame are connected success if I see around people. Of course I'm not 100% sure but I think almost. Most people think rich people is succeed people. So many people try to earn money doing work continuing. It may this isn't only in Korea. Bye

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Hi [이름]!

Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Keep on sharing your opinion to enhance your writing skill.^^

~Kelly^^

I think that money and fame are connected success if I see around people.

>> Based on what I see from people, money and fame are connected to success.
Of course I\'m not 100% sure but I think almost.

>> Of course, I\'m not 100% sure about it, but I think it is almost true.
Most people think rich people is succeed people.

>> Most people think rich people are successful.
So many people try to earn money doing work continuing.

>> So, many people try to earn money by working very hard.
It may this isn\'t only in Korea.

>> This situation is not only in Korea.
Bye

>> Correct.

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