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2017-11-22 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

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1. Tom qualified ____as_ an engineer before attending a business school. 2. Julie is completely overworked. She works __like_ a slave! 3. Today is Friday, so today, like_ on every Friday, we wear casual wear. 4. Strong leaders, ___like_Winston Churchill, are few and far between. 5. He's a very good swimmer. He can swim __like_ a fish! I learned drawing with colored pencil for 4 weeks. I start to learn drawing with watercolors today. Drawing with watercolors is more soft and natural. Teacher complimented me doing well. I expect next the drawing class.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!


Thank you for sharing another fun activity that you do.

I think it will help you with your creativity.

You will draw different things.

Do you want to be an artist some day?

I hope you continue that. ^^


_Teacher Dianne ^^


1. Tom qualified ____as_ an engineer before attending a business school. 

>> correct
 2. Julie is completely overworked. She works __like_ a slave! 

>> correct
 3. Today is Friday, so today, like_ on every Friday, we wear casual wear. 

>> as
 4. Strong leaders, ___like_Winston Churchill, are few and far between.

>> correct
 5. He\'s a very good swimmer. He can swim __like_ a fish!

>> correct

 I learned drawing with colored pencil for 4 weeks.

>>  I learned drawing with colored pencils for 4 weeks.
I start to learn drawing with watercolors today.

>> correct
 Drawing with watercolors is more soft and natural.

>>  Drawing with watercolors is  softer and more natural.
 Teacher complimented me doing well.

>> The teacher complimented me for doing well.
 I expect next the drawing class.

>>  I\'m looking forward to the next drawing class.  

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