homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello!
Sorry for not doing the homework these days, It is because of my laziness.
I think the comments you gave me yesterday is the same with that you gave me a few days ago. Is it right?
Essay:
I don't know how important are early reading skills in a child's academic performance. Because I didn't major in education and also my daughter is still young I didn't experienced it.
In my opinion, children need to play much than study.
There are three reason for above.
Firstly, they can learn how to cooperate with others from playing. Because, a playing always needs role-players.
Secondly, If the children don't play enough after they growing up they will feel regretful not to play enough. Extremely, some will playback when they are over aged.
Thirdly, after becoming teenager they will have enough time to learn knowledge. It not need to learn in advance. It just needs their parents guide the kids in the right direction.
강사 첨삭
HELLO MS. [이름],
I understand why you feel lazy these days.
I know that pregnant women feel that way.
I am sorry for giving you the same message.
I always prepare messages everyday but I remember, I opened my comment two days ago while doing your evaluations just for me to check the homework you have sent.
That is the reason I copied the wrong message.
Anyway, have a nice day ahead!
Teacher Sophia
Here are your corrections:
I don\'t know how important are early reading skills in a child\'s academic performance.
>> I don\'t know how important early reading skill in a child\'s academic performance.
Because I didn\'t major in education and also my daughter is still young I didn\'t experienced it.
>> I didn\'t major in education and my daughter is still very young so I don\'t have any experiences in this area.
In my opinion, children need to play much than study.
In my opinion, children need to play much than study.
>> CORRECT
There are three reason for above.
There are three reason for above.
>> There are three reasons to justify my statement.
Firstly, they can learn how to cooperate with others from playing. Because, a playing always needs role-players.
Firstly, they can learn how to cooperate with others from playing. Because, a playing always needs role-players.
>> Firstly, they learn how to cooperate with others through playing.
Secondly, If the children don\'t play enough after they growing up they will feel regretful not to play enough.
Secondly, If the children don\'t play enough after they growing up they will feel regretful not to play enough.
>> Secondly, if the children didn\'t enjoy playing when they were younger, they will regret those days when they get older.
Extremely, some will playback when they are over aged.
>> Extremely, some will still play even if they already aged.
Thirdly, after becoming teenager they will have enough time to learn knowledge.
>> Thirdly, after adolescence they will learn more things around them.
It not need to learn in advance.
>> As a result, it\'s not good to learn in advanced.
It just needs their parents guide the kids in the right direction.
>> It\'s very important for parents to guide their kids on the right path.
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