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Hi [이름],

I do encourage you to continue learning English. One of the key factors is to have patience. Nice job on your homework today, you are improving. Just persevere and you\'ll see yourself speaking the language well.

I hope you\'ll feel better soon!!!

Have a wonderful day!!!!

T. Jeny   

What is tour greatest fear ?
>>correct

MY greatest fear is disease

>>My greatest fear is getting a disease.
 When I was a child, I was so weak. so I have to going hospital once a week.

>>When I was a child, I was so weak, so I have to go to the hospital once a week.
 I have poor iron so I received it.

>>I was poor in iron so I have to get it from the hospital.
 And I exercised fix times a week and ate health food to grow up my health.

>> I exercised six times a week and ate health food to strengthen my body.
 I\'m very healthly now, but I\'m keep going exercise.

>>I\'m very healthly now, but I\'m keep on exercising.