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Creative Writing: What are the best and worst things about being wealthy?
It is different to people. If they use money to bad thing, It is not good. But they use money to good thing, It is good.
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It is different to people.
>>> It depends on the person.
If they use money to bad thing, It is not good.
>>> If they use their money for bad things, then it\'s not good.
But they use money to good thing, It is good.
>>> But if they use it for good things, then it\'s remarkable.
>>> OR: It\'s better if they\'ll use it for good things.
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