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2017-11-24 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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My first impression of my friend was that she was kind of loud and noisy. She was always laughing beside someone and talking. But as I got to know her, I realized that she can be fun to be around with, but she was also thoughtful and kind to other people. I guess my impression about her changed from loud and noisy to still kind of loud, but also kind.

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]!

Sometimes, our first impression of someone can last for a long time. But most of the time, it changes as we get to know a person.

Anyway, have fun this weekend, okay?

See you on Monday!

~Teacher Shanee^^,


My first impression of my friend was that she was kind of loud and noisy.

>>> Correct!

She was always laughing beside someone and talking.

>>> She was always talking and laughing with someone.

But as I got to know her, I realized that she can be fun to be around with, but she was also thoughtful and kind to other people.

>>> But as I got to know her, I realized that aside from her being fun to be around with, she\'s also thoughtful and kind to other people.

I guess my impression about her changed from loud and noisy to still kind of loud, but also kind.

>>> Correct!

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