homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Jun,
I do encourage you to continue learning English. One of the key factors is to have patience. Nice job on your homework today, you are improving. Just persevere and you\'ll see yourself speaking the language well.
I hope you\'ll feel better soon!!!
Have a wonderful day!!!!
T. Jeny
when I was young,I usually be scared by ghost.
>>When I was young, I was usually scared of ghost.
Although I couldn\'t see that, I often thought that the ghost was exist.
>>Although I couldn\'t see a ghost, I often thought it exists.
But, nowaday I don\'t believe that\' existing. Also, I hardly feel fear.
>>But, nowadays I don\'t believe that ghosts are existing, so I fear less.
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