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If I can change my appearance, I would remove spots on my skins. Since the spots look like skin trouble. When I remove the spots, my face look clean.
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Hello Jun,
We must do our best in order to be successful, but before we become successful we must undergo a certain training and sometimes it is dangerous.
I hope we can be successful in the future even if it is very difficult.
T. Jeny
If I can change my appearance, I would remove spots on my skins.]
>>If I can change my appearance, I would remove spots on my skin.
Since the spots look like skin trouble.
>>correct
When I remove the spots, my face look clean.
>>When the spots will be removes, my face will look clean.
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