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2017-11-27 · 첨삭 강사 Gemma

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What do you want most in a person - someone who is intelligent, or someone who has a sense of humor, or someone who is reliable? Which one of these characteristics is most important to you? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your choice. I want to be a reliable person. it is important to me. People don't trust unreliable person. And people need a trustworthy person for the position. If your boss is not reliable person, can you trust and follow your boss? All of the position is followed responsibility.

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What do you want most in a person - someone who is intelligent, or someone who has a sense of humor, or someone who is reliable? Which one of these characteristics is most important to you? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your choice.
I want to be a reliable person. it is important to me.

>>I want to be a reliable person. It is important to me.
People don\'t trust unreliable person. 

>>CORRECT
And people need a trustworthy person for the position.

>>And people need a trustworthy person for a position.
If your boss is not reliable person, can you trust and follow your boss?

>>If your boss is not a reliable person, can you trust and follow your boss?
All of the position is followed responsibility.

>>All position is followed by a responsibility.

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