Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, Allen!
Oh my! I was really surprised when I saw my schedule today.
Anyway, take care in San Francisco.
I\'m looking forward to hearing your stories when you come back.
I hope to speak with you again. ^^
_Teacher Dianne ^^
Hello, Dianne.
>> correct
I ‘m goning to San Francisco for business during this week instead of my co-worker
>> I\'m going to San Francisco for business during this week instead of my co-worker.
So I delayed this lesson unavoidably.
>> correct
>> or: So I postponed the class inevitably.
Please understand my situation because I didn\'t also know about this urgent trip utill last Saturday.
>> Please understand my situation because I didn\'t also know about this urgent trip until last Saturday.
Therefore I leave this message for you who dont know about my situation.
>> Therefore I left this message for you don\'t know about my situation.
So I look forward to talk about my trip to you when I will restart my lesson at next week.
>> So I look forward to talking about my trip to you when I will restart my lesson next week.
Bye See you next Monday.
>> Bye! See you next Monday.
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