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2017-11-27 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

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Hello, Dianne. I ‘m goning to San Francisco for business during this week instead of my co-worker So I delayed this lesson unavoidably. Please understand my situation because I didn't also know about this urgent trip utill last Saturday. Therefore I leave this message for you who dont know about my situation. So I look forward to talk about my trip to you when I will restart my lesson at next week. Bye See you next Monday.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Allen!


Oh my! I was really surprised when I saw my schedule today.

Anyway, take care in San Francisco.

I\'m looking forward to hearing your stories when you come back.

I hope to speak with you again. ^^


_Teacher Dianne ^^


Hello, Dianne.

>> correct
 I ‘m goning to San Francisco for business during this week instead of my co-worker

>>  I\'m going to San Francisco for business during this week instead of my co-worker.
So I delayed this lesson unavoidably. 

>> correct

>> or: So I postponed the class inevitably. 
 Please understand my situation because I didn\'t also know about this urgent trip utill last Saturday.

>>  Please understand my situation because I didn\'t also know about this urgent trip until last Saturday.
 Therefore I leave this message for you who dont know about my situation.

>>  Therefore I left this message for you don\'t know about my situation.
 So I look forward to talk about my trip to you when I will restart my lesson at next week.

>>  So I look forward to talking about my trip to you when I will restart my lesson next week.
 Bye See you next Monday.

>> Bye! See you next Monday.


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