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I regret m decision of saying facts that is true, but can be hurtful to others.
>>> I regret my decision of saying facts that were true but could be hurtful to others.
I sometimes say things before I consider other\'s feelings and that is a decision I always regret.
>>> Correct! [others\' feelings]
>>> OR: I sometimes say things without considering the feelings of other people.
It\'s also about my personality.
>>> Correct!
I don\'t consider other people\'s feelings when it comes to making my decisions.
>>> Correct!
One of the decision I regret is saying anything about how sometimes friendships don\'t always last.
>>> Correct!
>>> OR: One decision I regret is saying that sometimes friendship doesn\'t always last.
She knows it is true but sometimes it is better to believe that kinds of things are eternal.
>>> We know that it is true but sometimes it is better to believe that some things are eternal.
I also said something about being it nature\'s way to be born and face death at some time.
>>> I also said that it\'s natural to be born and face death at a point in our life.
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