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2017-11-28 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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I regret m decision of saying facts that is true, but can be hurtful to others. I sometimes say things before I consider other's feelings and that is a decision I always regret. It's also about my personality. I don't consider other people's feelings when it comes to making my decisions. One of the decision I regret is saying anything about how sometimes friendships don't always last. She knows it is true but sometimes it is better to believe that kinds of things are eternal. I also said something about being it nature's way to be born and face death at some time.

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Hi there [이름]!

Thanks for writing this.

I hope you are having a great time there. See you tomorrow.

~Teacher Shanee^^,


I regret m decision of saying facts that is true, but can be hurtful to others.

>>> I regret my decision of saying facts that were true but could be hurtful to others.

I sometimes say things before I consider other\'s feelings and that is a decision I always regret.

>>> Correct! [others\' feelings]

>>> OR: I sometimes say things without considering the feelings of other people.

It\'s also about my personality.

>>> Correct!

I don\'t consider other people\'s feelings when it comes to making my decisions.

>>> Correct!

One of the decision I regret is saying anything about how sometimes friendships don\'t always last.

>>> Correct!

>>> OR: One decision I regret is saying that sometimes friendship doesn\'t always last.

She knows it is true but sometimes it is better to believe that kinds of things are eternal.

>>> We know that it is true but sometimes it is better to believe that some things are eternal.

I also said something about being it nature\'s way to be born and face death at some time.

>>> I also said that it\'s natural to be born and face death at a point in our life.

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