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2017-11-28 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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What do you look forward to every Monday? ==> When it comes Monday, I always feel Monday blues. I spend weekends busily because my daughter wants to play with me. I don't have time to take a rest on weekends and it makes me tired. So I look forward to every Monday become a holiday. But it is my wish and I know it is impossible. Anyway, in my case, there is no meeting on Mondays. So I have time to think about my weekly schedule. I can make weekly plans when I am in the office on Monday. Although I have Monday blues on every Monday, I try to overcome it.

강사 첨삭

You sure have survived Monday, James! Congratulations!

And you have done your homework. Look at all your sound sentences once more! I am very happy. Thank you very much!

But still, cheer up! I bet your daughter, although at times she wakes you up too early, makes you smile. She\'s just a huge ball of sunshine.

Please send my regards to her!

-Klein-

What do you look forward to every Monday?
 ==>
 When it comes Monday, I always feel Monday blues.

>>When Monday comes, I always feel the Monday blues.
 I spend weekends busily because my daughter wants to play with me.

>>Correct
 I don\'t have time to take a rest on weekends and it makes me tired.
>>Correct

So I look forward to every Monday become a holiday.
>>So I look forward to every Monday to become a holiday.

But it is my wish and I know it is impossible.
>>Correct

Anyway, in my case, there is no meeting on Mondays.
>>Correct

So I have time to think about my weekly schedule.
>>Correct

I can make weekly plans when I am in the office on Monday.
>>Correct

Although I have Monday blues on every Monday, I try to overcome it.

>>Although I have Monday blues every Monday, I try to overcome them.

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