homework
학생이 쓴 원문
In the past time, people cummunicate by speaking. But, passing the time people can cummunicate by text. Finally, they enable to send messege to away the ohers.
강사 첨삭
Hello Jun
I encourage you to assess yourself and set up your goals, these goals are ownership or your learnings.
I encourage you to assess yourself and set up your goals, these goals are ownership or your learnings.
Please, be reminded that you need to encourage yourself to study English every day.
I know you can be successful!!!
T.Jeny
In the past time, people cummunicate by speaking.
>>In the past, people cummunicate by speaking.
But, passing the time people can cummunicate by text.
>>But after a few year, people can cummunicate by text.
Finally, they enable to send messege to away the ohers.
>>Finally, we are enable to send messages even if we are far from each other.
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