Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What advice would you give to an older person who wants to feel young?
i think it's a difficut title. because my writing English skill is not good.
but i try it.
I geuss I will say " The anwer is positive mind, you believe It's positive power."
강사 첨삭
Good morning [이름]! Thank you for trying your best in answering your homework.
I like your answer. There is actually no wrong answer for this type of homework.
Just take note of the corrections. ^^
~~Teacher May~~
i think it\'s a difficut title. because my writing English skill is not good.
but i try it.
>> The question is difficult to answer and my English writing is not good but I will try it.
I geuss I will say \" The anwer is positive mind, you believe It\'s positive power.\"
>> I will just say, \"You should think positively and believe that it is your strength.\"
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