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I can cook well but I don't like doing that.
I used to make foods everyday but not now.
Nowadays I sometimes go to buy side dishes and eat it.
I think I hope to live for me from now on.
I want to have only my life.
So I'm happy.
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Good morning [이름]!^^
Thank you for sending this in. Be happy and love yourself more.^^
Take care!
~Kelly^^
I can cook well but I don\'t like doing that.
>> I can cook well but I don\'t like doing it.
I used to make foods everyday but not now.
>> I used to make foods every day but not anymore.
Nowadays I sometimes go to buy side dishes and eat it.
>> Nowadays I sometimes buy side dishes and eat them.
I think I hope to live for me from now on.
>> From now on, I hope to live for myself.
I want to have only my life.
>> I want to focus my life.
So I\'m happy.
>> So I can be happy.
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