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2017-11-28 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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How could you stand a nag? ==> If my boss scold me, I want to talk to opposing opinion about his thinking. But I cannot do it becasue I have to endure it for my family. So I said to him "I am sorry" but actually I was thinking another thing like a happy experience, when he scold me. I think, sometimes there is a good point in his nag, but much of them is useless. I just want to avoid that situation at the moment, so I did quick response. I think it is a bad habit but I cannot fix it easily.

강사 첨삭

There you have it!

You found some time to complete this composition again. Thank you!

How are you doing?

Take it easy there, James!

If you want, we can talk about this further tomorrow.

Until then!

-Klein-


How could you stand a nag?
 ==> 


If my boss scold me, I want to talk to opposing opinion about his thinking.

>>If my boss scolds me, I want to talk about the opposing opinion against his thinking.
 But I cannot do it becasue I have to endure it for my family.

>>Correct [spelling check: because]
 So I said to him \"I am sorry\" but actually I was thinking another thing like a happy experience, when he scold me.
>>So I said to him, \"I am sorry\" but actually, I was thinking about another think like a happy experience when he scolded me.
I think, sometimes there is a good point in his nag, but much of them is useless.

>>Correct
 I just want to avoid that situation at the moment, so I did quick response.
>>I just wanted to avoid that situation at that moment, so I made a quick response.
I think it is a bad habit but I cannot fix it easily.

>>Correct

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