Homework

Hi Elaine!

Thank you for finishing your composition earlier.

Please take note of the corrections below.

I can\'t wait for our class. ^^

~~ Teacher Sharon.

I will watch YouTube with my new phone.

>> I will watch YouTube on my new phone.
I very like singers named SHINHWA so i usally watch their movie clip on weekend.

>> I like the group of singers called SHINHWA so i usally watch their music videos on weekends.
I bought a new phone one month ago.

>> Correct
My phone\'s screen is tall and big.

>> My new phone has a big screen.
This is why i watch Youtube with my phone.

>> This is why i watch YouTube on my phone.