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2017-11-29 · 첨삭 강사 May

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I want to talk with Yu jae-suk bacause he is a famous comedian in Korea. He is a gentle man. I would talk about his secret of success with him. Everyone likes him. I really wonder his lots of effort.

강사 첨삭

Hi Molly! Thanks for your answer.

We both like comedy. ^^

If I were also to choose a person to talk to, it will also be a famous person

and talk about his success.

~~Teacher May~~

I want to talk with Yu jae-suk bacause he is a famous comedian in Korea.

>> CORRECT
He is a gentle man.

>> He is gentleman.
I would talk about his secret of success with him.

>> I would like to talk about his secret to success.
Everyone likes him.
>> CORRECT
I really wonder his lots of effort.

>> I really wonder how he exerts too much effort.

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