homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What advice would you give to an older person who wants to feel young?
I'll talk to an older person "Enjoy you want"
I think that It is best way to feel young.
Hi May!
Actually, I'll delay tomorrow class.
Because I have to go work early.
So I can't talk with you tomorrow morning.
I'll see you on friday!
강사 첨삭
Hi Angela! Thank you for your time. ^^
I think you really look younger than your age.
Your positive outlook in life is just to enjoy and be contented whatever you have. ^^
~~Teacher May~~
I\'ll talk to an older person \"Enjoy you want\"
>> I\'ll tell to an older person that he/she should enjoy whatever he/she has in life.
I think that It is best way to feel young.
>> I think it is best to feel young.
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