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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
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I think the most dangerous transportation is airplane.
>> Correct.
If an airplane accident occurs most people may die.
>> Correct.
When I rode an airplane I have experienced one woman by me wasn\'t breathing suddenly and fell down.
>> When I rode an airplane, I saw one woman who suddenly collapsed and was not breathing.
Fortunately there was a doctor in the airplane and came around.
>> Correct.
Of course other accident is dangerous but we can find the way in the ground doesn\'t in the sky.
>> Of course, other types of accidents are also dangerous but it\'s easier to get help on land than in the sky.
So I think like this.
>> That\'s why I came up with this idea.
Bye~~~
>> Correct.
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