homework

Hi [이름]!

It\'s showing great responsibility on your part that you are taking part in this exercise.

I\'m glad that you are taking advantage of this opportunity to improve yourself.

I hope that you will keep it up.

I\'ll talk to you soon! ^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

I was especially memorable that I got a scholarship in college.

>> My special memory is when I got a scholarship in college.
When I was in college, I first became interested in Medical Accounting.

>> When I was in college, I was interested in Medical Accounting in the beginning.
I studied hard because it is interesting for me.

>> I studied hard because it was interesting for me.
Actually it is not because I tried to get a scholarship.

>> It was difficult at times because I was trying to get a scholarship.
So I will never forget that I got my first scholarship in college.

>> This is why I will never forget when I got my first scholarship in college.