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~~ Teacher Sharon

The most advantage is that I think it can distribute effectively the personal time like self-improvement.

>> The greatest advantage of having a part time job is that it can contribute to self-improvement.
It means, you can study English and exercise while also earning money.

>> In my part time job, I was able to practice speaking in English while also earning money.
And maybe you have a chance to make more personal connections.

>> Having a part time job can also allow you to make some personal connections.
Wha a awesome!

>> It is indeed awesome.
That\'s about it.

>> That\'s all I have to say on the subject.