Homework
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강사 첨삭
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~~ Teacher Sharon
My favorite beverage is water and fruits juice.
>> My favorite beverages are water and fruit juice.
I like the strawberry juice the most.
>> I like strawberry juice the most.
I don\'t like coffee.
>> Correct
I can\'t smell because of rhinitis.
>> I can\'t stand the smell because of my rhinitis.
So I feel just bitter to taste when I drinking coffee.
>> That is why I think coffee is too bitter for me.
And I don\'t like soda because I get the hiccups.
>> I also don\'t like soda because I get the hiccups.
So I usally drink water.
>> I usually drink water.
But I drink fruit juice when I go café.
>> But I drink fruit juice when I go to a café.
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