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Hi, [이름]!

This is a great essay. Thank you for writing it! ^^

I\'ve realized that planning is a very effective way to achieve your goals.

In addition to that, you should always have a back-up plan when things don\'t go your way.

I guess that\'s the secret of really successful people.

They have a direction and they know where they\'re going because they have a goal or a vision.

Anyhow, I hope you\'re doing great.

See you tomorrow. :)

~Teacher Charry

I totally agree with the idea.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> In my  point-of-view, this idea is correct.

Making a good plan is generally important and useful to achieve something.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Coming up with a good plan is generally important and useful to achieve something.

However if people concentrate on future too much it would be stressful.

>> However, if people concentrate on the future too much it would be stressful.

For example, if I recall every tasks I should finish, I would give up because I would be overwhelmed.

>> For example, if I recall every task I should finish, I would give up because I would be overwhelmed.

I found out just concentrating on short term schedule helps me to finish tasks.

>> I found out that just concentrating on a short term schedule helps me to finish tasks.

Not only thinking about future but also only recalling the past isn\'t good.

>> Not only is thinking about the future but recalling the past alone isn\'t good as well.

I sometimes wish I could turn back time because I regret things I did before.

>> I sometimes wish I could turn back the time because I regret things I did before.

It\'s impossible though and focusing too much on what happened before can\'t be productive.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> It\'s not impossible though and focusing way too much on what happened before is not productive.

I don\'t mean that we don\'t have too consider past or future.

>> I don\'t mean that we don\'t have to consider the past or the future.

Living each day would make everyday happy and it leads us to have good past and bright future.

>> Living each day would make everyday happy and it leads us to have a good past and a bright future.