homework
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HOMEWORK 1
\"Manners maketh man.\"
>> Correct
It is what the movie kingsman\'s Here heart said.
>> It is what Harry Hart in the Kingsman\'s movie said.
And I agree with him.
>> Correct
>> OR: I totally agree with him.
I think humans manner makes persnality.
>> I think human\'s manner makes their personality.
When person\'s manner is not good, other people will hate that person.
>> When a person\'s manner is not good, other people will hate that person.
It is why I think manner is important.
>> Correct
>> OR: In my opinion, that\'s the reason why having good manners is important.
HOMEWORK 2
I want to be a more then 150cm tall boy in 2017. So I will drink 2 glass of milk and go to bed at 10:00
>> I want to be more than 150 cm tall before the end of 2017, so I will drink 2 glasses of milk and go to bed at 10:00 PM.
>> OR: I want to be a boy who stands more than 150 cm tall before 2018, so I will drink 2 glasses of milk and go to bed at 10:00 PM.
Then I would more handsome
>> That would make me more handsome.
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