homework

2017-12-04 · 첨삭 강사 Amanda

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I want to be a more then 150cm tall boy in 2017. So I will drink 2 glass of milk and go to bed at 10:00. Then I would more handsome

강사 첨삭



Hey kiddo,

How\'s your day going?

Thanks for doing your homework.

Your answers are impressive, as always. Keep up the good work, my dear.


See you tonight!

T. Amanda ^-^


HOMEWORK 1


\"Manners maketh man.\"

>> Correct
 It is what the movie kingsman\'s Here heart said.

>> It is what Harry Hart in the Kingsman\'s movie said.


 And I agree with him.

>> Correct

>> OR: I totally agree with him.


 I think humans manner makes persnality.

>> I think human\'s manner makes their personality.


 When person\'s manner is not good, other people will hate that person.

>> When a person\'s manner is not good, other people will hate that person.

 
 It is why I think manner is important.

>> Correct

>> OR: In my opinion, that\'s the reason why having good manners is important.



HOMEWORK 2


I want to be a more then 150cm tall boy in 2017. So I will drink 2 glass of milk and go to bed at 10:00

>> I want to be more than 150 cm tall before the end of  2017, so I will drink 2 glasses of milk and go to bed at 10:00 PM.

>> OR: I want to be a boy who stands more than 150 cm tall before 2018, so I will drink 2 glasses of milk and go to bed at 10:00 PM. 


 Then I would more handsome

>> That would make me more handsome.

 

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