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~~ Teacher Sharon

Well, there are so many kinds of part time jobs in my country.

>> Correct
When it comes to the common part time jobs, we work at restaurant and cafe and theater and convenience store and so on.

>> When it comes to common part time jobs, there are those at restaurants, cafes, theaters, convenience stores and others.
Recently, we can approach to have a part time job because of a advanced recruit site.

>> Recently, we can have access to part time jobs through an advanced recruitment site.
Eventually, the common type is getting increased day by day.

>> Nowadays,  there are more people applying for part time jobs.
I hope that they have a part time job satisfied around the course.

>> I do hope that these people can get part time jobs that are appropriate for them.