homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Writing Exercise: What are the advantages of traveling by airplane? Give at least two (2). Answer in not more than five (5) sentences.^-^
1. If traveling by airplane, you can arrive the place fastly.
2. If traveling by airplane, you can see beautiful view from high.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, [이름]! ^^,) Happy Wednesday!
When you want to travel long distances, the plane is the ideal means of transport.
Moreover, you have the chance to admire the world from above and feel like flying yourself.
Thank you for answering your homework.^^
See you later in class!
_T. Mayleen :)
1. If traveling by airplane, you can arrive the place fastly.
>>> If you\'re travelling by airplane, you can arrive in your destination fast.
2. If traveling by airplane, you can see beautiful view from high.
>>> If you\'re travelling by plane, you can the beautiful view from up high.
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