homework
학생이 쓴 원문
How do you act when you are happy? Do you like being around happy people?
When I feel happy, I laugh loudly and clap my hands.
I like being around happy people.
When I'm with happy people, I feel happy.
I believe there is Happy Virus.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thank you for answering your homework.
I wonder what you mean in your last sentence.
Let\'s talk about that on Friday.
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~~Teacher May~~
When I feel happy, I laugh loudly and clap my hands.
>> When I feel happy, I laugh out loud and I clap my hands.
I like being around happy people.
>> I like being around with happy people.
When I\'m with happy people, I feel happy.
>> CORRECT
I believe there is Happy Virus.
>> I believe there is really happiness in the air.
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