Homework

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~~TEACHER CHARRY

I think established rules are basically helpful when we have to solve problems.

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Because established rules are usually made with accumulated experiences and knowledge.

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However when we encounter with a new type problem, established rules are often not enough.

>>However when we encounter with a new type of problem, established rules are often not enough.

For example, in the late Joseon dynasty in this land, people already had their own rules.

>>For example, in the late Joseon dynasty of this land, people already had their own rules.

Those rules were already established too well and small challenges trying to change the rules all failed.

>>Those rules were already established too well and small challenges which were trying to change the rules all failed.

>>Those rules were already established knowledgeably and minor challenges which were trying to change the rules all failed.

According to the custom, the people didn\'t want to accept western technologies.

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Therefore they tried to defend the country with old fashioned weapons and military strategies.

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Of course they failed and eventually allowed Japan to colonize the country.

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Therefore when established rules can\'t solve the current problems, seeking solution from out of previous rules could be better.

>>Therefore when established rules can\'t solve current problems, seeking solutions out of the previous rules could be better.