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2017-12-06 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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HOMEWORK: Writing Exercise: What's the most important thing a school should teach children? I think most important thing a school should teach children is morality. Even if they study really well and They are lack of moral ability, They grow up badly and will become difficult for society in the future. So i think most important thing a school shold teach childre is morality.

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I think most important thing a school should teach children is morality.

>>> I think the most important thing a school should teach children is morality.

Even if they study really well and They are lack of moral ability, They grow up badly and will become difficult for society in the future.

>>> Even if the study well it they lack morality then they will grow up badly and be difficult persons in our society in the future.

So i think most important thing a school shold teach childre is morality.

>>> So I think morality is the most important.

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