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I clearly remember what I experienced concerning 'caught red-handed' when I was a little child(two or three years old).
Korea was extremely poor about 60 years ago.
Almost everyone was poor because it was the time when the Korean war just ended.
My father was a public official in a small village, so his income must have been way humble.
Two meals a day were not unusual at the time.
Therefore, children were growing up not knowing 'snack' which could be regarded as sort of extravagance.
One day, my elder sister who was carrying me on her back was hanging about a small grocery store in my village.
She quickly snatched a few pieces of candy from the display stand and put one of them into my mouth.
Then she was pushing the one or two in her mouth when the owner noticed that.
She was caught red-handed.
The owner swore hard and slapped her face twice roughly.
I was so surprised at the scene and could never forget not only my sister's unaccountable behavior and the owner's severe slapping but also the sweet taste of the candy.
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HELLO MR. [이름],
Thank you for sharing your experience about \"caught red-handed\"
Have a nice day ahead!
Teacher Sophia
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I clearly remember what I experienced concerning \'caught red-handed\' when I was a little child(two or three years old).
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Korea was extremely poor about 60 years ago.
Korea was extremely poor about 60 years ago.
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Almost everyone was poor because it was the time when the Korean war just ended.
Almost everyone was poor because it was the time when the Korean war just ended.
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My father was a public official in a small village, so his income must have been way humble.
My father was a public official in a small village, so his income must have been way humble.
>> CORRECT
Two meals a day were not unusual at the time.
Two meals a day were not unusual at the time.
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Therefore, children were growing up not knowing \'snack\' which could be regarded as sort of extravagance.
Therefore, children were growing up not knowing \'snack\' which could be regarded as sort of extravagance.
>> CORRECT
One day, my elder sister who was carrying me on her back was hanging about a small grocery store in my village.
One day, my elder sister who was carrying me on her back was hanging about a small grocery store in my village.
>> CORRECT
She quickly snatched a few pieces of candy from the display stand and put one of them into my mouth.
She quickly snatched a few pieces of candy from the display stand and put one of them into my mouth.
>> CORRECT
Then she was pushing the one or two in her mouth when the owner noticed that.
Then she was pushing the one or two in her mouth when the owner noticed that.
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She was caught red-handed.
She was caught red-handed.
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The owner swore hard and slapped her face twice roughly.
The owner swore hard and slapped her face twice roughly.
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I was so surprised at the scene and could never forget not only my sister\'s unaccountable behavior and the owner\'s severe slapping but also the sweet taste of the candy.
I was so surprised at the scene and could never forget not only my sister\'s unaccountable behavior and the owner\'s severe slapping but also the sweet taste of the candy.
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