homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK:
OPINION: Young people, especially boys, are playing bloodier and more realistic video games than ever before, and scientists are looking for links between real life violence and violent video games. What do you think? Do violent video games make people more violent in real life? Why or why not?
Kindly answer in not more than five (5) sentences. ^-^
I can't understand this quastion..
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, [이름]! ^^,)
This question is all about the harmful effects of playing violent video games especially to young boys.
We can discuss this later in class if you want to, okay?^^
I will see you then later in class. Enjoy the rest of the day! Happy Friday! ^-^
_T. Mayleen :)
I can\'t understand this quastion..
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