homework!
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Is it best for people to accept who they are and what they have, or should people always strive to better themselves?
I suppose that Both are absolutely necessary. People should accept themselves and then strive to better. In doing so, they improve themselves before.
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We should never live a stagnant life, so we must continuously strive to be better^^
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Is it best for people to accept who they are and what they have, or should people always strive to better themselves?
>>CORRECT!
I suppose that Both are absolutely necessary.
>>I suppose that both are absolutely necessary.
People should accept themselves and then strive to better.
>>People should accept themselves and then strive to be better.
In doing so, they improve themselves before.
>>In doing so, they can improve themselves compared to who they were before.
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